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    December 14

    Go See About Them

    I wrote a poem for the first time in ages.  I think i will work with my cousin and make it into a song.  but yeah, here's the poem. It's called "Go See About Them."

    Dear God,

     

    I have a friend who needs you

    The whole that is in her heart only sees you

    But she tries to replace you

    In a strong attempt to disgrace you

    Saying she doesn't need you

    God go see about her

     

    There is this little boy down the street

    He lives in the little green house that looks off beat

    He is in a struggle for peace

    But knows only trouble indeed

    He doesn't know where to turn

    God go see about Him

     

    My family is falling apart

    Each feels nothing but their own stalling heart

    I look in their eyes and see hate

    Everything in life now is a debate

    For one after the other, there is a grudge

    God go see about them

     

    My friend has an imperfect past

    But before you will no secret last

    She knows of you

    But hypocrisy clones you

    She can't seem to grasp your true name

    God, go see about her

     

    God please let my prayers be heard

    The lives of these lost are not insured

    I know your hands will touch

    Let my prayers availeth much

    In Jesus' name I pray

    Amen

     

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